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Moshiach is Near


A line that never ends
Goes far out to sea
And lingers there
Amongst salt and fear
For all eternity
It stays above ocean
Still as a willow tree
Waiting for something
An unknown vision, see
Goes further it does not
And far around the bend
Is the unknown vision
Waits to meet the lines end
It withers, fades, appears again
Ready for it's time
But the lines end
Is still again-
Dares not to move out there
Centuries slip away
Generations slowly pass
Yet the line still lingers there
And the vision up ahead
The time will come
For the line to shift
And the vision to arise
And the line will dwell peacefully
In the visions enterprise.

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By Devorah Malka Reisner   More articles...  |   RSS Listing of Newest Articles by this Author
Devorah Malka is fourteen years old and lives in Pittsburgh, PA.

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Latest Comments:
Posted: Dec 29, 2011
impressed
wow Malka! That's a really nice poem! I'm very impressed :)
Posted By friend, pittsburgh, pa

Posted: Dec 29, 2011
WOW!
Beautiful! Very inspiring! Thank-you Malka.
Posted By friend, Pittsburgh, PA - Pennsylvania

Posted: Nov 27, 2011
MALKA!
Malka u r amazing and soooo talented!!
Posted By Chana E. , Pittsburgh, PA

Posted: Apr 21, 2011
ur so awesome!!!
Posted By ur cuz yael

Posted: Feb 10, 2011
Malka!!!!!
wow malka you really did an amazing job!!!! i love everything u write but this is amazing!! keep it up and let me know when you have something for me to read! :)
Posted By Bruchie Nadoff, pgh, pa

Posted: Jan 29, 2011
About this poem
B"H
The reason why I chose this poem is because everything that I said in this poem has a meaning, The reason why I referred to the Jewish People as a line: everything is made up of lines, straight ones curved ones, they all have lines and yet nobody gives a second thought about it, a line is just a line, but it is not that ,it is something more, it has a deeper significance, just as everything in this world has a deeper meaning and purpose. Also, just as everything has a reason, we can use everything to find a reason.
Posted By Malka R., Pittsburgh, PA

Posted: Jan 20, 2011
i love ur style!
keep it up!!!
Posted By Mushky R., albany

Posted: Jan 11, 2011
wow!!!!
im really impressed!
Posted By friend, USA

Posted: Jan 10, 2011
malka
i love it!!!! you are the best!!!!! keep on writing!!!!!
Posted By devorah leah, pittsburgh, PA



 


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