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A Little Key Was I


A little key was I
Felt myself being carved
And intricately shaped
To fit into the lock.
The locksmith held me
In his hands, big and rough
Warm and experienced
Leathery and tough.
He held me tight
And then slipped me down
Into his pocket
And I was jiggled around.
He then put me in a box
And took me into town
Dropped me into someone's hand
And then he left.
I was stroked on my smooth surface
And then put into a lock
I fit perfectly and struggled
As I quickly moved it down.
I was pulled out fast as was in
And cradled in the hand
And was put inside the box
And hidden in the rosebushes.
Day after day, week after week
I unlocked the door
With my front, so sleek.
Finally I was lifted
Into a pocket
And went on a walk
To the park.
But then, my sharp exterior
Pierced through the interior
And made a hole through the pocket
And I fell.
There I was,
Inside the woods,
In the middle of the wild,
Lying where I never would
But I couldn't move
So I just stayed there
Abandoned.
Days and weeks,
Months flew by
I spent all that time
Staring at the sky.
Squirrels nibbled me
Rain and snow fell
Years crept past
I did not do well.
I rusted, and I bended
And I even flaked a little
I was not gleaming shiny
I was simply just not me.
Finally, one day at last
I forgot about my past,
When a dear child came
Brushed off my dirt and muck
And held me in her hand
Just like I'd been held
On the day I was born

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By Liba Rimler   More articles...  |   RSS Listing of Newest Articles by this Author
Chaya Liba Rimler lives in Monsey, NY and goes to Cheder Chabad of Monsey. She is turning twelve and is the oldest in her family. Her interests include writing poetry and stories, and playing the piano.

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Posted: Jan 10, 2011
Go liba!!!!!
Go liba your amazing!!!!!! I miss your poem emails ;)
Posted By Ld from pgh, Pittsburgh, Pa

Posted: Nov 19, 2010
wow!
go liba!! that was an amazing poem!!
Posted By former g5 classmate

Posted: Nov 17, 2010
Beautiful writing!
Liba your take on the world, and the fresh new way you have of looking at ordinary simple things is astounding.
Beautiful poem!
Posted By Chaya Rochel- another proud aunt!, Brooklyn, NY

Posted: Nov 16, 2010
go Liba
that was great Liba!
Keep it up.
Love and regards from down under!
Posted By Chagit Rimler, Melbourne, Australia

Posted: Nov 16, 2010
Wow Liba!!!! Yasher Koach - great to see ur writing published!!!
Posted By Proud Aunt

Posted: Nov 16, 2010
Liba's Poem
Dear Liba,
What a wonderful poem! Your description of the "feelings" that this key had, are so heartwarming. Keep writing and keep posting, as we are all waiting to read more of your works!!
Posted By Marlene Lewis, montreal, Quebec, Canada

Posted: Nov 15, 2010
GO Liba!
You have a talent!! Keep it up!!
OS Classmate
Posted By Rivky LEvertov, SF NM

Posted: Nov 14, 2010
Liba
Dear Liba,
thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.
Posted By Tone Lechtzier, Brothers, Or US

Posted: Oct 28, 2010
liba is awesome
wow liba, this is amazing!! u should send them some of ur qoutes
Posted By sheindel r, fairlawn , nj

Posted: Oct 28, 2010
i <3 u liba!
this is really great writting! you are really awesome!
Posted By chani, bunkmate @ jgr, albany, NY



 


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